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Fiery Future Forever by ~Rosebud1313:iconRosebud1313:





Familiar emotion & undoubted devotion
For a love that always passes me by.
Banter & laughter at the pure feelings I have laid on the table.
                                           Back so achy, so tired,
We try to make it last.
We cry until we've won the battle,
Yet, we always lose the war.
Life is more than a game.

It seems so natural to regain your trust...


                                        To fall for your charm...


To lust for your body...


Slim & dark,
A walk in that fucking park.
We are so reminiscent of our fiery past.

You make me laugh,
                                                 You make me cry,
& worst of all you make me lie,
                    To myself & to those around me.


Bruises on my body,
You agonize my soul.
                                                    Passion so wise,
Stories so true...



I wonder what my life would be like, if I chose to spend it with you.
©2004-2009 ~Rosebud1313
:iconrosebud1313:

Author's Comments

What he does to my mind...

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:iconkietalis:
omg wow... so deep, and jumbled up, which shows mixed feelings, and the use of bold in the middle of sentances, awsome, i love how you positioned it all, and the structure awsome, ^_^, deep suff.
:iconfallencity:
O_o
That is really really cool. I love the odd structure and...WOW!

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:iconklark-kent:
:jawdrop:. That is amazing, i love the layout and the use of the HTML to make certain words stand out, good choice of words to make stand out aswell.

:+fav:.

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I love the use of the html structures with this, it adds to the words.
:iconforevertuesday:
Yes, I very much like the structure...

I can't tell you what to do, Sandy....you have to do what you want to do...
:iconundacova-sinna:
I luv this the structure is awesome you did it perfectly with emphasise and jumbling when it needs to be done to fully understand it

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no1 is a virgin the world screws us all
:iconwide-eyed-dreamer:
me likies alot hunny, very deep and full of emotion!! :hug:

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Women will never be equal to men until they can walk down the street with a bald head and a beer gut, and still think they are attractive to the opposite sex .
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Thanks a lot!

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Love,
Sandy:rose:
:iconrosebud1313:
He makes me so sad...

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Love,
Sandy:rose:

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